Heres a little essay I wrote what do you think?

The time has come to take the responsibility of democracy very seriously. The fate of the world lies in the hands of we the people of The United States of America. While Barrack Obama lays out ideas plain as day his oponent John McCain and his running mate Sarrah Palin spew lines of redorich over and over. So lets talk about these "phrases" we hear from McCain/Palin, first the word "Reform" there "Reforms" I garuntie you mean mandatory military service the acseptence of a national ID card and the surender of civil liberties in the name of "Country First". Secondly if you have not figured it out by now the only "Change" that can come from the McCain Ticket who has Voted with BUSH 90% of the time the President who has single handedly in only 8 years reversed 232 years of the persuit of life liberty and happiness, is the "Reforms" I spoke of above, again MANDITORY military service the accseptince of a national id card and the serenderence of civil rights. I call upon all those who are now undesided to vote for Barrack Obama I call upon those loyal patriots who have backed the honeralble Ron Paul to now use that same pion for Liberty to vote for Barrack Obama I call upon the people of this glorious free nation who are considering a vote for John McCain to rethink there decision and Join us this election and cast your vote for Barrack Obama. Why Barrack Obama I will Humbly explain myself. Barrack has Clear Ideas of where to take our country in the areas of the Economy, Education, Health Care and The war on Terror as John McCain has only one liners and wordplay and a record of backing the Bush administrations "Refroms" that trust me pale in comparision to what the McCain/Palin "Reforms" will be. Another one liner the McCain/Palin ticket spew over and over is this "Do Nothing Congress" well please hear me a congress cannot get anything done while the PRESIDENT VETO's almost EVERY bill that comes to his desk. In fact it is Actually President Bush who we have to thank for Nothing geting done as he has used his power of veto more than any other president in the history of the United States. If ignoring the people of the United States while daily bringing us closer to a Military Dictatorship than has ever been seen in this country sounds like "Change" to you than by all means cast your vote for John McCain. We the People of the United States of America have 53 Days left to hit the streets activly to participate in this democracy. Every Vote Counts! Spread the word we are in for the fight of our lives at home and abraud Make sure when you cast your ballot it is for what our forfathers and mothers have fought and died for.. Liberty. Please I implor you Vote for Barrack Obama for his "Change" is the Change of Liberty and Freedom, Education and Health, Diplomacy and Friendship. While McCain is more of the same with just a few more steps in the wrong direction. Thank you to all who read. God Bless, spread the word, VOTE BARRACK OBAMA!